Journey to the East
Last year in the middle of august
2018. I and my family went to saudi arabia to visit makkah. I and my family must come to the
airport before 9 a.m when i was in the airport i thought that the airplane would take me at
that time. But we need to wait for several hours. I was disappointed and bored
at that time.
After dzhuhur we went to juanda
airport in surabaya. We flew from juanda to jeddah at night. When morning comes, we was in the perfect time. The view was very
beautiful, i wanted to jumped out and
flew away, hehe, and i was very happy. After 12 hours on the sky, we arrived in
jeddah international airport. Then we went to medina and slept in royal inn
hotel it was very expensive and
luxurious hotel i had ever seen in my
whole life. And we were all happy to visit medina, after 9 days we went to
makkah to visit haram mosque to pray ummroh. After ummroh we stayed there for 5
days. Then we back to our hometown malang in indonesia.

my journey my experience.....
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Because it's narrative text, so all tenses must be past tense except the direct speech...I still dound some present tenses here...hehehehe..
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hara kon chid
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Deletewell, such a great adventure... did u find any terrorist in there? u know in saudi arabia there are alot of terrorism
ReplyDeleteBarakallah tol.. semoga berubah
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